Some great writing tips...

There is a wealth of info here for us novice writers. Read the whole thing.

Blogcritics.org: One Simple Rule for Improving Your Writing: "More tips:

Use simple, strong verbs (not simple, weak ones, like 'use'). For example, instead of saying, 'The linebacker tackled the running back,' say, 'The linebacker torpedoed the running back,' or say, 'The linebacker flattened the running back.' Vivid verbs appeal to the reader's senses and help make sentences more memorable. (A little alliteration doesn't hurt, either.)"